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25 June 2020

After being fed up with the programs that I don’t understand anymore, I went out for a walk.  It was cooling down and not as nasty out as when I wanted to take a walk at.  

You know it’s a bad day when you forget your fitbit.  After I logged off my work computer, I forgot that I took my fitbit off and ended going everywhere without my fitbit.  As I went to the lake with my fitbit and the battery dies on me.

Every now and then I miss a night of writing.  Tonight is that night.  Just the whole process of seeing that the process of stuff has changed through me off a bit.  Tomorrow, I will get that hour in before dinner.  The most important thing is to press forward.  I want to create stories.  I have an idea and I’m going with it.

I reached 19,000 words.  I’m getting to the tougher part of writing the story.  Fight scenes are probably the tougher bits to write.  In this book it is between Marianne who is twenty or thirty something fighting Kurt Grey who is thousands of years old.  Milo is a couch potato.  Not good in a fight.  He’s had karate training but that was years ago.  He’s more than likely going to hurt himself if he tries to fight.

Milo starts out the series as a couch potato who forgot what it’s like to be a fighter.  The second book is more about technology.  The third book he’s paired up with a zombie bounty hunter.  By the end of the third book he is lean from all the walking he does. And by the time fifth book is finished, he’s the strongest Mutant, er I mean, Mod alive.

I’m nearly done with the ending of the first book.  It’s getting to the more difficult part of writing.  Finishing up and making the transitions between scenes.  Make sure the previous scene lines up with the current scene.  Most of them already do that, but there are a few places that don’t.  And if I haven’t reached 30,000, looking at what needs more clearing up or explaining through scenes.

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